The Bass College

hey i have my cover and resume/ proposal done but i dont see where to put an attachment on here? i was wonderin if anyone would look at what i have come up with and let me know what ya think an for any suggestions. my email is jlinker31@msn.com and i will send it to ya

thanks

Jeff

Send it to Scottie here or Sam SML175 --  RIPPIN LIPPZ

try sam!

This is the one I already looked at earlier and replied to in the email??? Is this the same person? 

yea Steve it is man lol, i dont see how to attach nothin on here an dont have Sam or Sottie's email so?

thanks

you go to their profile and send hem a private message it goes to them at their email also 

Take a look here>> FAQ<<click

i did this on Word an saved it with a "link" so ill see if it works:

cover:

DIDNT WORK. 

Also take some time and look around through here also while you wait for responses. Start looking right here>> SPONORS/RESUMES, PROSTAFF <<click

i have bro i checked out others an those forums lol i been all over this site readin an checkin on things! I LOVE IT! thanks, great site man

Cool. You will get some more responses from people later.

You can upload this to a myriad of sources and then post the URL up here where we ca read it. Remember that people reading the forums or anywhere else your name appears will be taking note of your writing and correspondence so if you are looking to move up keep an eye on all communications as that is where employers and sponsors are looking. Some do not believe this but when we were hiring a tech at our school we let go of some really credentialed people due to their FB page, MySpace, and or writings we could view.

Send it to me as well, I may have some ideas for you.

tomsmail06@yahoo.com

ok this is it on pdf, no sign in or nothin is needed, should just be able to click the link an view it. thanks yall

https://acrobat.com/#d=UU2g3SnVL5aMYcS0A2lzvw

sorry for all of this but this one works as well now without a sign on so either one should work

https://skydrive.live.com/redir.aspx?cid=247837d9d954efe1&resid=247837D9D954EFE1!159&parid=247837D9D954EFE1!128&authkey=!AMreDn9Pk5EHIeo

There is a lot to be corrected. Can you post this as a Doc. file so I can highlight the areas that need to be worked on? For one there is no need to put member in quotes. You are also inserting negative impressions when you state that you "don not have a long list, never gave it much thought.  Also "I am am will be willing and able" is not structured correctly. You go back at the end to talk about fulfilling your dream, etc etc bit as I show here earlier in your paragraph you state you "never really gave it much thought" As I sai, you need to post this as a Doc. file and also do not have the 2 big fish at the top as it takes away from the message you are trying to convey. maybe a small one offset to the side but not 2 large ones.

o_town_boy16 at March 5, 2012 at 12:53 AM

looks awesome really detailed

thanks man i really appreciate it!

The other thing in addition to what Sam said, is that if I had no tournament wins or top finishes, or had no media exposure or experience, or public speaking, etc then I would concentrate more on listing anything I did that related to sales, seminars in fishing, clubs, goals and how you expect to achieve them, etc and what you can do for the company verses somebody else and why. 

thanks Sml, i tried it again i think with this link u can edit the document etc so, let me know

https://skydrive.live.com/redir.aspx?cid=247837d9d954efe1&resid=247837D9D954EFE1!159&parid=247837D9D954EFE1!128&authkey=!AK2_NDdKkrqfl-8

USMCanARMY at March 5, 2012 at 9:34 AM

thanks Sml, i tried it again i think with this link u can edit the document etc so, let me know

https://skydrive.live.com/redir.aspx?cid=247837d9d954efe1&resid=247837D9D954EFE1!159&parid=247837D9D954EFE1!128&authkey=!AK2_NDdKkrqfl-8

there is 3 pages in this thing so wasnt sure if yall knew that or not

thanks